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Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Lord Of The Flies 3

Jack's Journal

Right after I was done making my spear, I went off into the forest to kill a pig. Unfortunatley I was unsucessful. When I arrived back to shore you could tell I had had a vicissitudes of a day so I went to clean off. After cleaning off, Ralph came over to me, looked malevolently at me and started complaining on how my hunters and I were "putting off" making the huts, or doing really fast to get it over with just so we could go hunting. He said I was to rapt in trying to kill something.
The littluns keep talking abou the beastie, it is getting very annoying. They keep on saying at night how its going to come and get us if we don't be careful. Some one needs to show them who's boss. Later on, Roger and Maurice stomp on a sandcastle that the littluns had built, I hope they now know who's boss. Roger threw rocks at the littluns too, but missed on purpose. I went to the fire and told all the hunters to leave the fire and come with me, we WERE going to kill a pig, tonight. We all found a pig and we agreed that the hunters would form a circle around the pig behind the bushes and on Jacks signal we would charge with great belligerence. After we had caught the pig, Jack would leap in the circle and slit its throat. Are plan was indeed successful. On are way back to the island we had are pig on a stick and we were all chanting victory chants. As soon as we arrive to shore, Ralph starts yelling at me with great compulsion. He was saying how could you let the fire die out?! Why did you let the fire die out?! We could have been rescued! He said that they had seen a ship, but when they looked over for the smoke, it was gone. I told him that we needed meat and we could catch it easier with all the hunters. Then Ralph argued back, but we could have been rescued! We could have gone home! I was tired of all this yelling so I mimmicked something Piggy had said and punched him in the stomach. All the kids were cracking up by now, then Piggy sussurred and I was very angry at him so I knocked his specks right off his face. As Ralph was still yelling at me, Simon went over and picked up Piggy's specks for him. Then Piggy gave me a malevolent glance. Ralph then told me the least I could do was apologize so I said I was sorry for making the fire die out. Then Ralph stomped off saying there will be a meeting tonight!

1 comments:

Frederick P. said...

You did very good in details on explaining what you did in Jacks point of view. Also you used your vocab very wisely. Keep up the great work.